My reverse outline

Draft:
Reader:
What brought them here:
After reading, they should be able to:

Passage 1
What changes for this reader?
Question they might ask next
Where does the draft answer it?

Passage 2
What changes for this reader?
Question they might ask next
Where does the draft answer it?

Passage 3
What changes for this reader?
Question they might ask next
Where does the draft answer it?

Passage 4
What changes for this reader?
Question they might ask next
Where does the draft answer it?

Passage 5
What changes for this reader?
Question they might ask next
Where does the draft answer it?

First place the reader needs something they don't have:

Which exact words would you move, add, or cut?

Read the two versions. What becomes clearer? Did the move give anything away too soon?

If you can ask a reader one question, try: “Where did you first have to reread something, and what were you trying to find out?”

Worksheet from Wercend: https://wercend.com/
Worked examples: https://azimi.me/wercend-revision-workbook/